The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map shows the development of the village of Rye mouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Presented in the two maps is information describing how the small coastal town has transferred from the year 1995 to the present day.
Overall
, what stands out from the maps is that the main development of the village is the dwelling area.
Additionally
, green spaces are being reduced in order to build sporty areas. With regards to the southern part of the village the most noticeable changes, alongside the sea there was a fishing port
along with
a fish market in 1995. Now,
this
area has been demolished with the fishing port completely gone and the erection of the apartments substituting the previous market. Across the fish market was a shop that had been repurposed to the restaurant . In terms of the eastern side, the cafe has remained intact,
while
the hotel with the addition of the parking lot. Remaining to the northern half of the village, on the west side of the main road, there is an extension of the small road , attaching with the addition of more houses . The east side has the largest development where farmland has been repurposed into a golf court, at that place, the forest park has been demolished, to make way for the erection of a tennis court.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • transformation
  • residential areas
  • infrastructure
  • connectivity
  • commercial development
  • public services
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • economic growth
  • lifestyle changes
  • quality of life
  • sustainability
  • layout
  • connectivity
  • impact
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