El Niño is the name of a warm ocean current that affects weather patterns on both sides of the Pacific Ocean. The diagrams compare normal conditions in the Pacific with El Niño conditions.

El Niño is the name of a warm ocean current that affects weather patterns on both sides of the Pacific Ocean. The diagrams compare normal conditions in the Pacific with El Niño conditions.
The illustration demonstrates how to change the weather pattern with warm
water
, which is called
to
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El Niño.
Overall
,
it is clear that
El Niño conditions make serious
problem
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which
is
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result in significant changes in both countries (Australia and Peru). On the one hand, it is evident that strong
winds
trade the storm clouds which can be well situated in light
place
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to rain.
Moreover
, the west week
winds
make the right following of warm
water
to the west Pacific,
while
cool
water
can circulate in the Pacific Ocean.
Therefore
,
this
circulation makes rich nutrients and Peru can keep fishing the amount number of quality fish. Looking at the second conditions illustration, there are notable changes that almost every cycle of nature shows inverse situations. To be specific, since weak trade east
winds
blow, the storm clouds keep
move
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to the east and
Peru
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weather
change
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to rainy weather. These can
make
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the
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result
of
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poor nutrients because the warm
water
keeps
pushed
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warm
water
to
east
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the east
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by strong west
winds
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  • trade winds
  • upwelling
  • nutrient-rich
  • marine life
  • fisheries
  • thunderstorms
  • weather patterns
  • suppress
  • coral bleaching
  • livelihoods
  • natural disasters
  • emergency response systems
  • economic stability
  • biodiversity
  • crop yields
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