El Niño is the name of a warm ocean current that affects weather patterns on both sides of the Pacific Ocean. The diagrams compare normal conditions in the Pacific with El Niño conditions.
The illustration demonstrates how to change the weather pattern with warm
water
, which is called Use synonyms
to
El Niño.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
El Niño conditions make serious Linking Words
problem
which Fix the agreement mistake
problems
is
result in significant changes in both countries (Australia and Peru).
On the one hand, it is evident that strong Unnecessary verb
apply
winds
trade the storm clouds which can be well situated in light Use synonyms
place
to rain. Fix the agreement mistake
places
Moreover
, the west week Linking Words
winds
make the right following of warm Use synonyms
water
to the west Pacific, Use synonyms
while
cool Linking Words
water
can circulate in the Pacific Ocean. Use synonyms
Therefore
, Linking Words
this
circulation makes rich nutrients and Peru can keep fishing the amount number of quality fish.
Looking at the second conditions illustration, there are notable changes that almost every cycle of nature shows inverse situations. To be specific, since weak trade east Linking Words
winds
blow, the storm clouds keep Use synonyms
move
to the east and Wrong verb form
moving
Peru
weather Change noun form
Peru's
change
to rainy weather. These can Fix the agreement mistake
changes
make
Verb problem
apply
the
result Correct article usage
apply
of
poor nutrients because the warm Change preposition
in
water
keeps Use synonyms
pushed
warm Add a missing verb
being pushed
water
to Use synonyms
east
by strong west Add an article
the east
winds
Use synonyms
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