El Niño is the name of a warm ocean current that affects weather patterns on both sides of the Pacific Ocean. The diagrams compare normal conditions in the Pacific with El Niño conditions.
The illustration demonstrates how to change the weather pattern with warm
water
, which is called to
El Niño.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, it is clear that
El Niño conditions make serious problem
which Fix the agreement mistake
problems
is
result in significant changes in both countries (Australia and Peru).
On the one hand, it is evident that strong Unnecessary verb
apply
winds
trade the storm clouds which can be well situated in light place
to rain. Fix the agreement mistake
places
Moreover
, the west week winds
make the right following of warm water
to the west Pacific, while
cool water
can circulate in the Pacific Ocean. Therefore
, this
circulation makes rich nutrients and Peru can keep fishing the amount number of quality fish.
Looking at the second conditions illustration, there are notable changes that almost every cycle of nature shows inverse situations. To be specific, since weak trade east winds
blow, the storm clouds keep move
to the east and Wrong verb form
moving
Peru
weather Change noun form
Peru's
change
to rainy weather. These can Fix the agreement mistake
changes
make
Verb problem
apply
the
result Correct article usage
apply
of
poor nutrients because the warm Change preposition
in
water
keeps pushed
warm Add a missing verb
being pushed
water
to east
by strong west Add an article
the east
winds
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