the chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart illustrates the average weekly expenses of families in an unspecified country
1968
and 2018.
Change preposition
in 1968
Overall
, spending on housing , transport and leisure increased .Meanwhile, food ,fuel and power, clothing and footwear, personal
goods decreased, Correct word choice
and personal
while
household goods remained unchanged with no change.
In 1968, average spending focused on food. It accounts for about 35% of income,however
over five Add a comma
however,
decades
it has dropped sharply to half. Take turns spending for clothing and Add a comma
decades,
footware
reduced by halved by 10% to 5% and 8% to 4%. Fuel and power only Correct your spelling
footwear
dections
slightly from 7% to 4%.
Leisure surpassed and accounted for the highest spending level after 50 years from 8% to 22%. Not least, spending on housing Correct your spelling
decreased
also
increased sharply from 10 to 18% and ranked second in income spending. Transport increased slightly from 8% to 14%. From 1968 to 2018 the household has not changed, still maintaining the spending level of 8% of total costs.
Overall
it is interesting to observe the changes in quantity data on various areas of families spending their weekly income over the span of 50 years .Submitted by quynhtranhbh on
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