The line graph shows the number of kilometers traveled per car in five countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the number of kilometers traveled per car in five countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Demonstrated in the given line graph is the
distance
a
car
could travel in 5 nations from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
, all the countries saw a downward trend in the travelling
distance
per
car
, with the exception of the US and Britain.
Additionally
, Japan was the nation that had the most fluctuation in the number of kilometres travelled,
while
the inverse was true for France. Beginning with 3 nations experiencing a decline in their
car
travelling
distance
, Germany’s began at 1600
km
, which over doubled Japan’s at around 700
km
. In the next few years,
while
Germany’s figure decreased slightly to 1550
km
then
levelled off until 2007, Japan’s
distance
travelled per
car
dropped to about 500
km
in 1998 before fluctuating between 550
km
and 350
km
until ending the period at exactly 400
km
in 2010. Regarding France’s statistics, it started at 1000
km
and witnessed a small fluctuation prior to being recorded at 900
km
in the
last
year. Shifting focus onto the remaining statistics, as far as the US’s length travelled per
car
was concerned, it began at around 1750
km
, which was the longest
distance
compared to other nations, and finished the period at 1800
km
after fluctuating a little. In terms of the UK, its figure mirrored the same pattern as it ended with a longer
distance
than the start, at just above 1400
km
.
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