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The line graph shows the number of kilometers traveled per car in five countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the number of kilometers traveled per car in five countries between 1990 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Demonstrated in the given line graph is the
distance
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 a
car
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 could travel in 5 nations from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
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, all the countries saw a downward trend in the travelling
distance
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 per
car
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, with the exception of the US and Britain.
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, Japan was the nation that had the most fluctuation in the number of kilometres travelled,
while
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 the inverse was true for France. Beginning with 3 nations experiencing a decline in their
car
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 travelling
distance
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, Germany’s began at 1600
km
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, which over doubled Japan’s at around 700
km
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. In the next few years,
while
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 Germany’s figure decreased slightly to 1550
km
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then
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 levelled off until 2007, Japan’s
distance
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 travelled per
car
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 dropped to about 500
km
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 in 1998 before fluctuating between 550
km
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 and 350
km
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 until ending the period at exactly 400
km
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 in 2010. Regarding France’s statistics, it started at 1000
km
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 and witnessed a small fluctuation prior to being recorded at 900
km
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 in the
last
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 year. Shifting focus onto the remaining statistics, as far as the US’s length travelled per
car
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 was concerned, it began at around 1750
km
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, which was the longest
distance
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 compared to other nations, and finished the period at 1800
km
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 after fluctuating a little. In terms of the UK, its figure mirrored the same pattern as it ended with a longer
distance
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 than the start, at just above 1400
km
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words distance, car, km with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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