The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2010 to 2015, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2010 to 2015, with projections until 2030.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the table provided reveals the relative metric
tons
of different grains (including wheat, barley, maize and rice)
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produced in a certain country between 2010 and 2015
along with
the projections until 2030.
Overall
, it is evident that wheat is the leading grain crop and it has been shown that there is an increasing trend in the amount of grain produced in the future. Wheat, by far, had the largest amount of grain production since 2010 which is,
also
, expected to grow steadily in the future;
whereas
, Barley,
while
having
moderate
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production level, the figure is projected to increase exponentially, doubling from 50
million
tons
in 2010 to 100
million
tons
within two decades. In stark contrast,
however
, the quantity of maize and rice produced, which had harvested the least amount in 2010, at 34 and 24.7
million
tons
repectively
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,
are
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going to climb
at
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a mere 1
million
tons
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tons, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • metric tons
  • trend
  • projected
  • notable
  • increment
  • decrement
  • fluctuation
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • consistent
  • proportion
  • comparison
  • forecast
  • extrapolate
  • economic impact
  • environmental factors
  • yield
  • cultivation
  • sustainable
  • harvest
  • increase
  • decrease
  • sector
  • quantify
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