The pie chart below represents the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The bar chart shows how these causes affected three regions of the world in the 1990s. Summarise the data by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The presented graphs illustrate the primary causes of
land
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degradation
globally and provide statistics on the proportion of these causes in North America, Use synonyms
Europe
, and Use synonyms
Oceania
.
The pie chart reveals that the factors contributing to Use synonyms
land
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degradation
are threefold. The most significant cause is over-grazing, accounting for 35% of the total Use synonyms
degradation
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over-cultivation
at 28%. Together, these three causes represent 93% of the total, with the remaining 7% attributed to other factors.
The accompanying table shows the percentage of degraded Use synonyms
land
in three regions. Use synonyms
Europe
has the highest percentage of degraded Use synonyms
land
at 23%, followed by Use synonyms
Oceania
at 13%. In Use synonyms
Europe
, the high level of Use synonyms
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degradation
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due to
deforestation (9.8%) and Linking Words
over-cultivation
(7.7%). In Use synonyms
Oceania
, over-grazing is the dominant cause, with a strikingly high rate of 11.3%. Use synonyms
In contrast
, North America has a total Linking Words
land
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degradation
of 5%, which is mainly Use synonyms
due to
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over-cultivation
(3.3%).
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Overall
, it is evident that deforestation in Linking Words
Europe
and over-grazing in Use synonyms
Oceania
are the principal reasons for Use synonyms
land
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degradation
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In contrast
, in North America, the primary issue is Linking Words
over-cultivation
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