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The chart below shows the main reasons for study among students of different age group.

The chart below shows the main reasons for study among students of different age group.
#study #students #age #group
The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of
target
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targets
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 that motivate
student
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students
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 to
study
in
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at
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 different
age
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ages
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.
Overall
,
most
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the most
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 noticeable is how the
career
 is learned more in the under 26 years-old group,
while
 the reverse situation
take
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 place in
over
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the over
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 49
age
 group.
Additionally
, as the
age
 level
increase
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, the ratio of aim
study
 for interest slowly but surely changes with it. With regards to 3 fields that show students choose to
study
 for
career
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a career
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 more than 50%. In terms of under
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26
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 and between 26 and 29
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years old
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, they accounted for exactly 80% and 70%, respectively,
whereas
the
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occupational
for
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interest had less than nearly
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 of
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those
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 two
age
 phases. Meanwhile, in
30's
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the 30's
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, about 58% of
career
 purposes are tended to
study
 by students, doubling interest. Turning to the other
age
 group phases where
thay
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they
 displayed a shift in studying purposes. As for
40's
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the 40's
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, 2
these
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reason
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reasons
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 witness the same portion ( at 40% ).
In the
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The
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 49 years - old and onwards, the students
study
 for pleasure is 70%,
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 the aim of
career
 at under 20% a little bit.
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