The tables below give information about sales of Fairtade- labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summsrise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The tables illustrate the sales of Fairtade-labelled
coffoe
and bananas from 1999 to 29994 in the Correct your spelling
coffees
UK
, Switzerland
, Denmark, Belgium, Sweden
.
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and Sweden
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that in 1999, While
Switzerland
had the most
rate both in bananas and Correct word choice
highest
coffees
, the Fix the agreement mistake
coffee
UK
experienced a rapid increase, and became the first one in the consumption of coffee in 2004.
It is interesting to note that, in the coffee proportions, the UK
skyrocketed from 1.5 millions
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million
of
euros to 20 Change preposition
apply
millions
in 2004. Change to singular
million
Switzerland
had doubled its sales by 3 millions
. Change to singular
million
Moreover
, Denmark and Sweden saw the same advancement, which was an increase around
0.2. Change preposition
of around
Finally
, Belgium experienced a rapid growth of 0.7 for 5 years.
On the other hand
, in the bananas' income, Switzerland
rose from 15 to 47 millions
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million
of
euros between 1999 and 2004. Change preposition
apply
While
the UK
and Belgium witnessed a sharp jump throughout the period, Sweden and Denmark had been showing a downward trend, and they dropped almost 1 millions
euros during a period of 5 years.Change to singular
million
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