The first graph shows the number of train passengers from 2000 to 2009; the second compares the percentage of trains running on time and target in the period.
The line graph illustrates
about
the number of Change preposition
apply
passengers
who used trains
as well as
the percentage
of trains
running on time between 2000 and 2009 in Japan.
Overall
, it is evident that, over the period, the portion of train passengers
nearly leveled
off Change the spelling
levelled
while
the percentage
of trains
running on time fluctuated.
According to
the data, the number of train patron recorded nearly between 35 and 40 million
throughout the first half of the period. However
, in 2003 and 2005, increased substantially from 36 million
to 46 million
, respectively. And then
constantly decreased and recorded 41 million
in 2009.
Looking more closely, one can see that the percentage
of trains
running on time was recorded at 92% in 2000, which had a difference of 3% compared to the ordinary target. The figures increased by 96% until 2004. However
, it decreased dramatically to 92% in 2006.
During the period from 2005 to 2008, the percentage
of trains
running was at its lowest, despite a high number of passengers
. In contrast
, in 2003, the trains
ran more frequently but had fewer passengers
compared to the other years.Submitted by kopopig on
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