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the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
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The bar chart displays the proportion of
coffee
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 and tea purchasing and drinking habits in different cities in Australia, namely Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.
It is clear that
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 the majority of Australians prefer going to a café to buy
coffee
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 or tea in the past month.
By contrast
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, fewer Australians opted to buy fresh
coffee
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according to
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 the given chart. Looking at the information in more detail, the highest proportion of people visiting a café for
coffee
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 or tea was in Melbourne and Hobart, both accounting for nearly 63%, followed by Sydney at around 61%. The lowest percentage of people buying fresh
coffee
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 was in Brisbane and Adelaide, both at approximately 33%. As can be seen, it is notable that Adelaide was the only city where the proportion of buying instant
coffee
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 surpassed fresh
coffee
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, with the former at around 50% and the latter
nearly
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at nearly
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 48%.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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