the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart displays the proportion of
coffee
and tea purchasing and drinking habits in different cities in Australia, namely Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.
It is clear that
the majority of Australians prefer going to a café to buy coffee
or tea in the past month. By contrast
, fewer Australians opted to buy fresh coffee
according to
the given chart.
Looking at the information in more detail, the highest proportion of people visiting a café for coffee
or tea was in Melbourne and Hobart, both accounting for nearly 63%, followed by Sydney at around 61%. The lowest percentage of people buying fresh coffee
was in Brisbane and Adelaide, both at approximately 33%.
As can be seen, it is notable that Adelaide was the only city where the proportion of buying instant coffee
surpassed fresh coffee
, with the former at around 50% and the latter nearly
48%.Change preposition
at nearly
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