The graph below shows the average monthly change in the price of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comaprisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the price of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comaprisons where relevant.
The graph given illustrates the average
change
in the value of three metals per month in 2014.
Overall
, zinc had the most changes among them
at the end
of 2014,
while
nickel had the least amount of changes. Nickel started as a metal that frequently changed in
price
compared to other metals, it dramatically fell to a -3 per
cent
change
in
price
in March, and it maintained the same level from March to April. Nickel fluctuated from April to November, reaching a 1-centcent
change
in
price
in November and staying the same during December. Copper had the least changes at the start,
this
metal experienced a fluctuation the whole year, hitting a 2per
cent
change
in
price
in December. Zinc peaked at a 3 per
cent
change
in
price
in February, followed by a decline to its lowest, -3 per
cent
change
in
price
. It witnessed a growth to a 2 per
cent
change
in
price
in December.
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