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The graph below shows the average monthly change in the price of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comaprisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the price of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comaprisons where relevant.
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The graph given illustrates the average
change
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 in the value of three metals per month in 2014.
Overall
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, zinc had the most changes among them
at the end
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 of 2014,
while
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 nickel had the least amount of changes. Nickel started as a metal that frequently changed in
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 compared to other metals, it dramatically fell to a -3 per
cent
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change
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 in
price
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 in March, and it maintained the same level from March to April. Nickel fluctuated from April to November, reaching a 1-centcent
change
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 in
price
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 in November and staying the same during December. Copper had the least changes at the start,
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 metal experienced a fluctuation the whole year, hitting a 2per
cent
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change
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 in
price
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 in December. Zinc peaked at a 3 per
cent
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change
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 in
price
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 in February, followed by a decline to its lowest, -3 per
cent
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change
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 in
price
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. It witnessed a growth to a 2 per
cent
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change
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 in
price
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 in December.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words change, price, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 11 times.
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