The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040

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the population in various Asian

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countries between

1970 and 2020,

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gives predictions for 2030 and 2040.

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, the percentage of people living in

Philippines

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, Malaysia, Thailand,

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and Indonesia

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experienced a dramatic climb from 1970 to 2020. As we can see in the graph, the population might continue to rise in the next 20

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Philippines

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was the highest among the other three countries with over 30% and ,

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followed

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by a

slightly

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rise in the next year. Sequently (, it increased sharply in 1990.

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, there was a

mildly

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drop from 1990 to 2010

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followed by a gentle climb in 2020. And

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consistently to over 50% in the next 20

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, Malaysia started with almost the same population(30%)and ended with the highest

populations

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among the other three countries.

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trend increased slowly to over half of 40% between 1970 and 1990 and climbed

signifenctly

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significantly

to more than 70% in the next 30

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that it will

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stably to over 80% in the future. The percentage of

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citizens in Indonesia was the lowest in 1970 and it kept increasing to over 50% after 50

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continues

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to jump to more than 60% in 2040.Thailand started with just below 20%

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followed by a

mildly increased

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in 1990 and remained

consistently

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in the next year. In 2020,

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proportion

negllgiblely

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climbed to just over 30% and it may have a

rapidly grow

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between 2020 to 2040.