The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.
The line graph illustrates the
production
levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
, all rates
decreased except for the rate
of coal. Moreover
, the production
level
of petroleum
was always the highest.
Moving to a detailed analysis, the production
level
of petroleum
ranked first (90 energy
units
) while
the rate
of coal production
was 80 energy
units
in 1981. Over the next 5 years
, the rate
of petroleum
production
increased significantly by 50 energy
units
. However
, the rate
of coal fluctuated and declined to 60 energy
units
. After 10 years
, the rates
of petroleum
fluctuated while
the coal rates
decreased slightly by 20 energy
units
. From 1996 to the end of the period
, the rates
of petroleum
production
almost remained stable at 140 energy
units
, whereas
the rate
of coal again declined and finished the period
at 35 energy
units
.
In terms of natural gas, the rate
of production
was 40 energy
units
at the beginning of the period
. Over the next 10 years
, the rates
remained stable at the initial level
before climbing to 80 energy
units
in 1996. After 5 years
, the production
level
increased steadily and finished the period
at 100 energy
units
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