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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given indicates about fairtrade two categories in 5 different countries
UK
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,
Switzerland
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,
Denmark
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, Belgium, and
Sweden
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 between the years 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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, it is clear to see that
sales
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 of Fairtrade-labelled coffee are upswing in all five given nations
as well as
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bananas
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.
However
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, the average of
bananas
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 in Belgium and
Sweden
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 dropped in the second year when compared to before.
To begin
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 with, the number of the
UK
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 and
Switzerland
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 in 2004 was peak than in 1999 from 1.5
million
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 euros in the
UK
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 in the year 1999 and 2004 increased to 20
million
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also
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Switzerland
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 are double rise in 2004.
While
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,
Denmark
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,
Belguim
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, and
Sweden
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 are small in growth number like in
Denmark
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 from 1.8
million
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 up to 2
Belguim
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 and
Sweden
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 have changes just only a tiny amount.
In addition
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,
bananas
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 have been in demand in the
UK
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,
Switzerland
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 and
Denmark
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 since 1999 average
sales
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 in the
UK
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 were 1.5
million
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 and in 2004 they were large inflate with 47
million
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 alternatives,
Bananas
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 were
also
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 popular in
Switzerland
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 in figure 1999
sales
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 of 1
million
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 and in the next given year is 5.5
million
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 in
Denmark
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sales
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 to about 0.6
million
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 and get larger in 2004 around 4
million
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. Anywise, it is noticeable to see that
banana
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bananas
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in
Belguim
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 and
Sweden
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 are unpopular in
Belguim
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 in a small reduced number of approximately 1.8
million
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 in 1999 and only 1
million
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 in 20004.
Furthermore
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,
Sweden
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 has had the biggest fall in the amount from 1999
sales
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 without 2million and in 2004 with as little as 0.9
million
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, switzerland, denmark, sweden, sales, bananas, million, belguim with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • consumption patterns
  • sustainable agriculture
  • ethically sourced
  • market demand
  • statistical trends
  • sales figures
  • incremental growth
  • market share
  • consumer awareness
  • corporate responsibility
  • socially conscious consumerism
  • benchmarking
  • sales trajectory
  • quantitative comparison
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