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The following diagram shows the process of cloning a sheep. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The following diagram shows the process of cloning a sheep. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied diagram indicates how a
sheep
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 was generated in the factories.
Overall
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,there are several stages for cloning a
sheep
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,starting from taking body and egg cells from two different
sheep
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 and ending with cloning a lamb by the first
sheep
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. First of all,the body
cell
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 is taken from
sheep
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 A in order to be ready
that
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for
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 the DNA
is
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to be
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 extracted from the
cell
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.At
this
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 time,the Egg
cell
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 is taken from
sheep
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 B where the Nucleus can be removed from the
cell
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.
Subsequently
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,the DNA from
sheep
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 A is fused with egg
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cell
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cells
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 from
sheep
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 B where they comprise a new fused
cell
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 together.
The following step is
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 that the fused
cell
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 is developed into
embryo
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an embryo
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 which is located in
uterus
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the uterus
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 of
foster
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the foster
a foster
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 mother which
the
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apply
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sheep
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 C can generate a new lamb.
Finally
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,a lamb is cloned from
sheep
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 A and It illustrates that the generation
if
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of
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sheep
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 A can be expanded by humans in experimental places.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sheep, cell with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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