The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevent.
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The bar chart illustrates a comparison between married women and married
men
in the average Use synonyms
hours
of unpaid Use synonyms
work
each week.
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Overall
, it can be seen that the maximum Linking Words
unpaid
Correct quantifier usage
number of unpaid
work
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hours
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was
done for married Correct subject-verb agreement
were
men
. There is a significant difference between males and females in all given categories.
The average Use synonyms
hours
that Use synonyms
men
without any child Use synonyms
work
without Use synonyms
paid
was 30 Replace the word
pay
hours
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it rose to just over 50 Linking Words
hours
if they had one or two kids . Use synonyms
Men
with more than three children Use synonyms
they
Correct pronoun usage
apply
work
60 Use synonyms
hours
without money.
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On the other hand
, we can notice from the chart that there is no huge difference in Linking Words
women
data .Change noun form
women's
In addition
, there is a slight decline in unpaid time Linking Words
depend
on the number of kids .Wrong verb form
depending
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