The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in 4 countried in 1970 and 2000.

The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in 4 countried in 1970 and 2000.
The given graph illustrates the proportion of males and females from 60-64 in different countries who were employed in 2000 and 1970.All the units were measured in percentage.
Overall
it can be seen that the
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of men in employment is the proportion biggest in the total.
In addition
,it can be seen that the USA and Australia women in employment had similar. It can
also
be noted that the ratio of women aged 60 to 64 in employment in 1970 and 2000 was smaller than men. Belgium was the lowest with 1970 had 7% and 2000 had 8%.
Additionally
,the USA and Australia were quite similar from 1970 to 2000 in the USA,decreased by about 2% from 38% to 36%.In Australia,it declined from 18% to 16%,held at 3%. Turning to the remaining data,
it is clear that
the bonus in 2000 was bigger than in 1970.Speaking of Japan,it was the highest in 2000 with 86% and 74% in 1970.Moving
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Belgium,it had a large amount with 19% was the lowest in 1970,
then
it increased to 60% in 2000.

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