the graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000

the graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000
The bar charts display the percentage of individuals aged 60-64 who remained in the
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force, categorized by gender, in the years 1970 and 2000. From an
overall
perspective, it's clear that the number of senior employees decreased over time across all countries, with a sharper decline observed among
woman
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compared to men.
Additionally
,
Belgium
experienced the most significant reduction in the percentage of elderly workers for both genders. In 1970, 795 of
man
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aged 60-64 in
Belgium
and 76% in
Japan
were employed, slightly lower than the
USA
(86%) and
Indonesia
(84%). Thirty years later, these figures dropped by 8 to 13% in the
USA
,
Japan
and
Indonesia
,
while
Belgium
saw a significant decrease of 27% in the
porportion
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proportion
of working males. For women aged 60-64, the employment rates varied more widely among the four nations
comapared
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compared
to men . In 1970, the
USA
had the highest percentage of working women at 78%, followed by
Indonesia
(65%),
Belgium
(63%), and
Japan
at 56%. By 2000, the figures had notably decreased to around 45 to 50% in the
USA
,
Japan
, and
Indonesia
,
whereas
Belgium
experienced a minimal decline of 8%.
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