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The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60 – 64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000.

The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60 – 64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000.
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The bar charts illustrate the rate of males and females 60 – 64 years old who worked in four different countries between 1970 and 2000.
Overall
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,
men
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 were higher than
women
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 in four countries.
Women
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 in
Belgium
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 hadn’t a lot of difference in the
two
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 timelines.
Whereas
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,
men
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 in
Belgium
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 had a large difference between
two
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 years.
To begin
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 with, females in
Belgium
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 had 7% in 1970 and It went up slowly to 8% in 2000. In the USA,
women
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 were employed by around 38% in 1970. In 2000, It dropped to 36%. Japan employed 40% of
women
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 aged 60 – 64 in 1970. Next
two
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 decades, it increased to 43%. Moving onto Australia, 18% of
women
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 aged 60 – 64 were employed in 1970. In 2000, It fell down to 16%. Turning into detail,
men
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 in
Belgium
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 were employed around 19%. Next 20 years, it rocketed to 79%. The USA employed 55% of
men
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 in 1970. In 2000, it flew up to 73%. In Japan, 74% of
men
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 aged 60 – 64 were employed. Next
two
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 decades, it went up to 86% was the highest. In 1970, 47% of
men
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 aged 60 – 64 were employed in Australia. In 2000, It rose to 76%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, belgium, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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