THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE PERCENTAGE OF RIVER WATER QUALITY IN UK RIVERS THAT IS CLASSIFIED AS HAVING GOOD CHEMICAL QUALITY BETWEEN 1990 AND 2002.
THE PROVIDED CHART COMPARES THE PERCENTAGE OF THE SYNTHETIC QUALITY OF RIVER WATER IN PARTS OF THE UK FROM 1990 TO 2002 .
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, IT CAN BE SEEN THAT THE PERCENTAGE OF RIVER WATER IN WALES AND NORTHERN IRELAND AREAS HAS SIMILARITIES FROM THE FIRST Linking Words
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TO THE FINAL Use synonyms
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IN FINAL Linking Words
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HAD A DIFFERENCE IN DETAILS . Use synonyms
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AND SCOTLAND , Use synonyms
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TENDED TO FLUCTUATE UNEVENLY OVER THE Use synonyms
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AND SO DID SCOTLAND.
LOOKING AT THE FIGURE IN WALES AND NORTHERN IRELAND DETAILS, IN THE FIRST Use synonyms
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UNTIL 1998 , THE PERCENTAGE OF RIVER WATER QUALITY IN Use synonyms
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AREAS HAD SIMILARITIES APPROXIMATELY FROM 90% TO ABOVE 90%. Use synonyms
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AREAS WERE UNCHANGED BUT Use synonyms
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AFTER 1998 WALES DECREASED FROM OVER 90% TO JUST UNDER 90% , OTHERS ROSE FROM AROUND 90% TO NEARLY 100%.
TURNING TO THE REMAINING STATISTICS , BY 1990 Linking Words
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HAD INCREASED BY 20% , FROM AROUND 45% TO AROUND 65% IN 1996 . Use synonyms
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THAT, Linking Words
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WAS A SHARP DECLINED TO 30% , DECLINED BY 35%. Use synonyms
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THE SAME YEAR IMMEDIATELY , IT WAS WENT UP AGAIN TO 50% . REGARDING Linking Words
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SCOTLAND , ALL IN Remove the preposition
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THE FIGURES FLUCTUATION THROUGH THE Add the comma(s)
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, IT HAD THE LOWEST POINT IN THE BEGINNING WITH APPROXIMATELY 21% AND THERE WAS A SURGE UNTIL 2000 WITH 50% AND IT SLIGHTLY WENT DOWN TO 40% IN THE FINAL YEAR AFTER THE SURGE IN 2000.Use synonyms
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