THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE PERCENTAGE OF RIVER WATER QUALITY IN UK RIVERS THAT IS CLASSIFIED AS HAVING GOOD CHEMICAL QUALITY BETWEEN 1990 AND 2002.
THE PROVIDED CHART COMPARES THE PERCENTAGE OF THE SYNTHETIC QUALITY OF RIVER WATER IN PARTS OF THE UK FROM 1990 TO 2002 .
OVERALL
, IT CAN BE SEEN THAT THE PERCENTAGE OF RIVER WATER IN WALES AND NORTHERN IRELAND AREAS HAS SIMILARITIES FROM THE FIRST YEARS
TO THE FINAL YEARS
. ALSO
IN FINAL YEARS
, BOTH
HAD A DIFFERENCE IN DETAILS . ENGLAND
AND SCOTLAND , BOTH
TENDED TO FLUCTUATE UNEVENLY OVER THE YEARS
AND SO DID SCOTLAND.
LOOKING AT THE FIGURE IN WALES AND NORTHERN IRELAND DETAILS, IN THE FIRST YEARS
UNTIL 1998 , THE PERCENTAGE OF RIVER WATER QUALITY IN BOTH
AREAS HAD SIMILARITIES APPROXIMATELY FROM 90% TO ABOVE 90%. BOTH
AREAS WERE UNCHANGED BUT ALSO
AFTER 1998 WALES DECREASED FROM OVER 90% TO JUST UNDER 90% , OTHERS ROSE FROM AROUND 90% TO NEARLY 100%.
TURNING TO THE REMAINING STATISTICS , BY 1990 ENGLAND
HAD INCREASED BY 20% , FROM AROUND 45% TO AROUND 65% IN 1996 . BESIDES
THAT, ENGLAND
WAS A SHARP DECLINED TO 30% , DECLINED BY 35%. THEN
THE SAME YEAR IMMEDIATELY , IT WAS WENT UP AGAIN TO 50% . REGARDING TO
SCOTLAND , ALL IN Remove the preposition
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ALL
THE FIGURES FLUCTUATION THROUGH THE Add the comma(s)
ALL,
YEARS
AS WELL AS
ENGLAND
, IT HAD THE LOWEST POINT IN THE BEGINNING WITH APPROXIMATELY 21% AND THERE WAS A SURGE UNTIL 2000 WITH 50% AND IT SLIGHTLY WENT DOWN TO 40% IN THE FINAL YEAR AFTER THE SURGE IN 2000.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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