Topic: The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000.
The given diagrams illustrate the proportion of men and female aged 60-64 remaining in the workforce from four different nations between 1970 and 2000.
The rate of men between the ages of 60 to 64 who still
working
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work
were
higher than Change the verb form
was
person
in the same age bracket in both years. Fix the agreement mistake
people
Overall
, it can be seen that there was decreasing
in employment among every percentage of male and female workers in the age group of 60-64.
In terms of figures for men in their early or mid-60s continuing to work, in 1970 those in Japan held the highest percentage at a notable 85%, followed by those in Belgium, Australia and the US. with 79%, 76%, 73% respectively. The most notable decline was witnessed by male workers aged 60-64 across the frame at 19% in 2000. Change the form of the verb
decrease
Furthermore
, similar movements but with different magnitudes can be observed in the pictures of America and Japan. and Australia, which fell slightly to 55%, 74% and 47% during the same period.
Turning to retention of information from the chart, the proportion of middle-aged female
aged 60-64 who are still working Fix the agreement mistake
females
while
others have left Japan is highest at 18% in Belgium and significantly lowest was 8% in 1970. Meanwhile, the proportion of female
still participating in the Fix the agreement mistake
females
labor
force in both the US and Australia has shown contradictory changes with the figures showing signs of gradually increasing from 36% to 39% and 16% to 18% during the same period in 2000.Change the spelling
labour
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