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THE GRAPH BELOW SHOWS FOUR METHODS OF DEALING WITH WASTE IN FOUR COUNTRIES. SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELEVANT.

THE GRAPH BELOW SHOWS FOUR METHODS OF DEALING WITH WASTE IN FOUR COUNTRIES. SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELEVANT.
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The
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bar chart illustrates information
of
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 four different countries in dealing with waste with four methods.
Overall
, it can be seen that landfilled was the highest in
three
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the three
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 countries excepted in
netherlands
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Netherlands
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 was the lowest.
However
, in
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the Netherlands
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Netherlands
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Netherlands,
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 the highest was recycled
while
 in
others country
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other countries
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 it was the lowest. Looking at the figures in detail, we can see that the majority
in
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dealing with garbage by landfilled except
Netherlands
. Particularly, Italy and Spain
where
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were
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 around 40% of their methods making the highest figure. The UK reached a high top with approximately 65% Moving onto
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as
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 chemicals,
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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 was the only highest
in
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others
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the
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 three countries at 67%.
However
, Italy and
UK
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the UK
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 recorded
averageous
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averages
average
 figures
at
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 around 20% and 13% respectively. The remaining was lowest at about 10%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words netherlands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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