The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The

given

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bar chart illustrates the amount of both

gender

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genders

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employees

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of employees

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in some types of jobs in

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last

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the last

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year.

Overall

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, it can be seen that there were more men than women in all jobs,

excepting

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for professionals and

clerial

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clerical

which had more

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females

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female

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employees

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.

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,

while

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tradespeople had the most

number

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of males, that of

females

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in

clerial

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clerical

during the survey. Regarding to 3 careers which had a

clearly

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clear

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difference in the

number

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of

employees

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in both

gender

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genders

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. As for managers, there were exactly 200000 men

work

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working

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for

this

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job, which was a third of that

in

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of

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women.

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the same time, the

number

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of

females

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in tradespeople and production was more than 100000 people

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that of males in tradespeople was 9 times higher and that in production was nearly 6 times higher. Turning towards the

remaning catorgies

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remaining categories

where there was

a

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apply

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liitle

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little

difference in the amount of male and female

employees

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. In terms of professionals and

clerial

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clerical

, the

number

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of males and

females

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was only approximately 50000 and 120000 people apart,respectively.

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, the difference between the

number

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of men and women in semi-professionals was about 150000 people.