The graph below shows four methods of dealing with waste in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows four methods of dealing with waste in four countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Presented for consideration is a bar chart pertaining to the
percentage
of four ways of dealing with
waste
in four countries.
Overall
, the
percentage
of recycled water in the Netherlands was the highest
while
the
percentage
of burnt in the
UK
was lower than the other types of
waste
. Looking at the
percentage
of
waste
in the
UK
going to landfills accounts for 65%
while
40% in Italy and
Spain
.
However
, the
percentage
of
waste
Landfilled in the Netherlands is only 8% of
waste
ending up in three. In burnt, in the Netherlands burnt about 10% of their
waste
, which is triple the rate in
Spain
approximately 30%. Moving onto the
percentage
of burnt
waste
, Italy burns 22% of its
waste
while
in the
UK
only about 4%. During use as chemicals, in the
UK
and
Spain
was similar by about 18%. The
percentage
of recycled
waste
in Italy recycles is about 20%
while
in the United Kingdom and
Spain
approximately 14% and 11% respectively.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.

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