the graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Japan
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in 1970 and the Use synonyms
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in 2000.
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males
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Japan
were always the highest and it went up from 74 per Use synonyms
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biggest in 2000 with 79 per Use synonyms
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after it increased from 19 per Use synonyms
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in 1970. the Use synonyms
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biggest in 1970 was the Use synonyms
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and went up to 73 per Use synonyms
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chart in 2000. Linking Words
Finally
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Australia
had increased from 47 per Use synonyms
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to 76 per Use synonyms
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