Some people think that it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transportation system such as railway and trains. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Some

people

say that it is more necessary to invest in motorways and roads

instead

of social transport systems like

trams

and

railways

.

This

writer’s essay disagrees totally

that

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situation and gives the

advantage

of the tram’s convenience

as well as

the drawback of

air

pollution from vehicles. It is vital to understand trains or

trams

the convenient transportation when they can contain many

people

for once a

trip

.

Trams

are quick and convenient

in

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moving

people

around the

city

in a short time.

Moreover

, it

also

needs not much money to develop and improve to modernize them to serve

people

fluently.

Additionally

,

trams

or public vehicles

also

can take less local

people

’s money to take part in the

trip

.

For example

,

Japan

is spending more and more money developing the quality of electric buses for

people

travelling around the

city

, especially since

Japan

has enormous elder

people

,

therefore

trams

are increasingly used in that country

as well as

evidence of the

advantage

in

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investing in

trams

all over the world. Some

community

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communities

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say that it is more necessary to invest in motorways and roads

instead

of social transport systems like

trams

and

railways

.

This

writer’s essay disagrees totally with that situation and gives the

advantage

of the tram’s convenience

as well as

the drawback of

air

abuse from freight. It is vital to understand trains or

trams

the convenient transportation when they can contain many

community

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for once a

trip

.

Trams

are quick and convenient for moving

nation

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nations

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around the

city

in a short time.

Moreover

, it

also

needs

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not

much

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salary to develop and improve to modernize them to serve

public

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fluently.

Additionally

,

trams

or public transit

also

can take less local

society’s

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property to take part in the

trip

.

For example

,

Japan

is spending more and more wealth developing the quality of electric buses for society travelling around the

city

, especially since

Japan

has

enormous

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elder

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population,

therefore

trams

are increasingly used in that country

as well as

evidence of the

advantage

in investing in

trams

all over the world.

On the other hand

, public transportation

also

does not produce smoke and gas causes

air

deterioration compared with motorbikes or personal travel. Improving the

railways

and

trams

is encouraging society to use the bus. It can reduce a large amount of waste gas

as well as

carbon dioxide from motorbikes using buses. Airbreeze deterioration

also

increases dramatically if crowds prefer using trains to cars. Take Vietnam as an example,

this

country is advancing everyone using electric cars by investing strongly in VINFAST company and many companies

also

turn common taxis into electricity

service

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services

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to reduce

air

infection. In conclusion, the government spends more and more pay on motorways and roads than on public transport systems

such

as

trams

and

railways

is a disadvantageous effect of extreme environmental problems in the present day.