Some people think that it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transportation system such as railway and trains. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
Some
people
say that it is more necessary to invest in motorways and roads instead
of social transport systems like trams
and railways
. This
writer’s essay disagrees totally that
situation and gives the Change preposition
with that
advantage
of the tram’s convenience as well as
the drawback of air
pollution from vehicles. It is vital to understand trains or trams
the convenient transportation when they can contain many people
for once a trip
. Trams
are quick and convenient in
moving Change preposition
for
people
around the city
in a short time. Moreover
, it also
needs not much money to develop and improve to modernize them to serve people
fluently. Additionally
, trams
or public vehicles also
can take less local people
’s money to take part in the trip
. For example
, Japan
is spending more and more money developing the quality of electric buses for people
travelling around the city
, especially since Japan
has enormous elder people
, therefore
trams
are increasingly used in that country as well as
evidence of the advantage
in
investing in Change preposition
of
trams
all over the world. Some community
say that it is more necessary to invest in motorways and roads Fix the agreement mistake
communities
instead
of social transport systems like trams
and railways
. This
writer’s essay disagrees totally with that situation and gives the advantage
of the tram’s convenience as well as
the drawback of air
abuse from freight. It is vital to understand trains or trams
the convenient transportation when they can contain many community
for once a Change to a plural noun
communities
trip
. Trams
are quick and convenient for moving nation
around the Fix the agreement mistake
nations
city
in a short time. Moreover
, it also
needs
not Verb problem
does
much
salary to develop and improve to modernize them to serve Add a missing verb
have much
public
fluently. Correct article usage
the public
Additionally
, trams
or public transit also
can take less local society’s
property to take part in the Change noun form
society
trip
. For example
, Japan
is spending more and more wealth developing the quality of electric buses for society travelling around the city
, especially since Japan
has enormous
Add an article
an enormous
the enormous
elder
population, Correct word choice
elderly
therefore
trams
are increasingly used in that country as well as
evidence of the advantage
in investing in trams
all over the world. On the other hand
, public transportation also
does not produce smoke and gas causes air
deterioration compared with motorbikes or personal travel. Improving the railways
and trams
is encouraging society to use the bus. It can reduce a large amount of waste gas as well as
carbon dioxide from motorbikes using buses. Airbreeze deterioration also
increases dramatically if crowds prefer using trains to cars. Take Vietnam as an example, this
country is advancing everyone using electric cars by investing strongly in VINFAST company and many companies also
turn common taxis into electricity service
to reduce Fix the agreement mistake
services
air
infection. In conclusion, the government spends more and more pay on motorways and roads than on public transport systems such
as trams
and railways
is a disadvantageous effect of extreme environmental problems in the present day.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task response
Make sure to clearly state your stance in the introduction and maintain this stance throughout the essay.
coherence cohesion
Use linking words and phrases to help the reader follow your argument more easily.
task response
Provide more detailed explanations and support your arguments with relevant evidence or examples.
coherence cohesion
Organize your paragraphs logically, with one main idea per paragraph that supports your overall argument.
task achievement
The essay contains some relevant examples and explanations, particularly the mention of Japan's investment in electric buses.
task achievement
The essay presents a clear argument against prioritizing spending on roads and motorways over public transportation systems.
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion