Many individuals think that watching
is useless for
,
others assume it has beneficial effects for
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as they
becameChange the form of the verb
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mature.
writer’s opinion is the latter idea and the reasons why will be outlined in
essay.
First of all, watching
is one of the most vital factors
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helping
learn more knowledge. Parents can turn on programs which regard wild animals or world education
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displayed on
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.
,
can watch some cartoons or animation for entertainment after studious hours. It will reduce stress and pressure
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and make them more interested in learning by television.
, watching
haveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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transmissionCorrect article usage
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of knowledge and a good grasp of various fields.
,
will study their way through amusement. It is evident that many parents let their kids study
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relyCorrect word choice
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on programs
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.
Another point
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be considered is that
can
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addicted to
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and start to ignore learning.
, some adults believe that it wastes much time
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childFix the agreement mistake
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of sending them to extracurricular classes at
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.
that,
may see toxic programs
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demonstrated
as violence or inappropriate video
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for babies.
,
should watch
under
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of parents or install surveillance cameras in
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in order to find out immediately.
,
should
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to Change preposition
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their time and
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contentsFix the agreement mistake
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which Correct pronoun usage
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they look at on
.
is the fact in Vietnam, some kids become naughty
lack of guidance.
In conclusion, watching
has
positiveAdd an article
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impact on babies if they are controlled thoughtfully.
, I think that the latter statement is the best opinion.