In some countries there has been an increase in the number of parents who are choosing to educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school.Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

The majority of parents choose to educate children at
house
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are
increasing
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than educate
at
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them at
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school
.
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author
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not argue that the drawback of easy to distract and
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not have social skills. The most disadvantageous factor of studying at
home
is that
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makes
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children
easy to
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distract
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distracted
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.
In other words
,when
learner
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learners
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study
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studies
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at
home
,they can
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to
distract
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distracted
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with
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social media,social
plattforms
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platforms
and so on.
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,hard to keep concentrate on
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the lesson
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or hard to learn by heart.Take
in
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epidemic
for
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instance,learners have to
study
online because they can not go to
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school
.I am the eyewitness that my friends post some pictures on the Internet
while
the teacher is teaching. Another drawback of learning at
home
is do not have social skills.
This
means they do not have opportunities to connect with people like their friends or do not know how to
do teamwork
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work
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.
For example
,learners who
study
at
home
when
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coming
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to
the
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society,they do not know how to respond
with
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to
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difficult
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a difficult
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situation
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situations
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.
Moreover
,when they go to universities,they do not have much
experiences
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experience
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to do
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teamwork
as well as
how
to
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solving
the
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apply
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problem
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problems
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skills.
However
,
learn
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learning
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at
home
is have
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some
benefit
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benefits
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like
have
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having
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the
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comfortable
atmostphere
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atmosphere
and no pressure at the time.
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means it
do
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not take too much time to go to
the
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school
that is
do
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not afraid to be late.
Consequently
,comfortable to
study
.
For instance
,they always wake up at 6 AM to go to
school
and get dressed
while
study
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studying
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at
home
you just need to access
on
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that
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apply
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softwares
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software
like Zoom or Google
meet
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to enter
at
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apply
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the class.
To sum up
,
have
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having
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the
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a
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comfortable
atmostphere
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atmosphere
is outweighed than easy to distract and
do
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not
have
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having
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social
skill
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skills
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.
Hence
,have a big impact on the process of the student when
do
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an exam.

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