THE TABLE GIVES INFORMATION ABOUT THE WATER USE IN THREE SECTOERS IN SIX COUNTRIES.

CONTAINED IN THE TABLE IS THE INFORMATION PERTAINING TO SIX DIFFERENT

COUNTRIES

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ATER

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AFTER

USAGE CATAGORISED BY DOMESTIC, AGRICULTURAL AND INDUSTRIAL PURPOSES.

OVERALL

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WATER

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ULTILIZIAN IN TERMS OF AGRICULTURAL FIELD CONSUME MOST OF THE

WATER

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FROM SIX

COUNTRIES

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, WHILST USES APPEAR TO BE THE LEAST

WATER

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-CONSUMED PORTION. LOOKING AT THE TABLE FOR

FURTHER

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DETAILS, IT IS EVIDENT THAT

AUSTRALIA

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AUSTRALIAN

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HOUSEHOLD USES

WATER

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MORE THAN EVERY

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COUNTRIES

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COUNTRY

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DOMESTIC

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THE DOMESTIC

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FIELD. THE SECOND BIGGEST

WATER

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CONSUMER IS

CANADIAN

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CANADA

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, WITH 279 M3. CHINESE RESIDENT

WATER

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ULTIZIAN

ACCOUNT

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ACCOUNTS

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FOR LESS THAN

ONE- TENTH

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ONE-TENTH

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THE FINALISED AMOUNT OF CANADA. IN TERMS OF INDUSTRIAL

WATER

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CONSUMPTION,

CANADA

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CANADA'S

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INDUSTRY LEADS THE CHART WITH 832 M3,

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FLLOWED

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FOLLOWED

BY TURKEY WITH 731 M3

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WATER

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OF WATER

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IN USE, WHICH

NEARLY

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IS NEARLY

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DOUBLE THE AMOUNT OF

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THE UK

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. WITH RESPECT TO FARMING

WATER

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APPLICATION,

RUSSIA

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RUSSIA'S

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FIGURE IS THE MOST REMARKABLE,

WIH

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WITH

1863 M3. CANADA AND

TURKEY

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TURKEY'S

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IRRIGATION MAKE UP ABOUT 1238 M3 AND 1482 M3 RESPECTIVELY. THE QUANTITY OF

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AGRICULTURAL

ALGRICULTURAL

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AGRICULTURAL

WATER

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OTHER

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THE OTHER

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THREE

COUNTRIES

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ARE

COMPABLE

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COMPATIBLE

CAPABLE

COMPARABLE

RAINGING

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RANGING

FORM

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FROM

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741 TO 810 M3

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THE TABLE GIVES INFORMATION ABOUT THE WATER USE IN THREE SECTOERS IN SIX COUNTRIES.

Nowadays the amount of garbage we produce is increasing and this is becoming a global problem. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

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