The pie charts below show the percentage of students on the one adult education centre taking a various courses offered in 1985 and this year
Demonstrated in the pie charts are data pertaining to the proportion of learners at an academic institution experiencing a diversity of offered
courses
in 1985 and this
year. The figures are measured in percentages.
Generally, it can be witnessed that modern language courses
have been taken by most students, whereas
the opposite was true in music
appreciation
in 1985. In addition
, music
appreciation
and local history are replaced by IT courses
, which get the highest percentage of participating pupils, and art this
year gets the lowest.
Looking at the figures for further
details, it is apparent that 24% of learners chose modern language as their main course in 1985. Additionally
, the rate of students who took part in fitness and dance courses
was the second highest, at 22%. This
number was followed by art and local history with 17% and 15%, respectively. Moreover
, cooking got the lowest data with 14%, and music
appreciation
got the lowest percentage with only 8%.
Turning to the remaining statistics, there is an alteration in music
appreciation
and local history with the IT course, which recently took the responsibility of 27% of pupils. Furthermore
, the fitness and dance courses
have remained unchanged at 22%, followed by cookery and modern language with 19% and 17%, respectively. Finally
, art course students' percentage has fallen from 2% to 15% this
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words courses, music, appreciation with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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