The maps show a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment

The maps show a present layout of an office building and plans for its future redevelopment
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Two designs were put forward for consideration that involved the potential redevelopment of a working building.
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, there are impressive renovations across all aspects of the scheme.
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to introducing outdoor seating space and expanding the station. Starting from the left edge of the plan, the lawn will be cleared and made way for outdoor seating at the top.
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, passing by the entrance near
this
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space there are many types of chairs. Moving closer to the centre of the commission building, the main entrance will likely be rearranged from four small offices
at the end
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of the centre to a position between two expanded offices during the time period shown. Facing the main gate, the kitchen and canteen will be renovated to make room for two offices. Meanwhile, the cloakroom that will house these facilities in the future still exists and the WC room behind
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cloakroom will be altered and located outside the main block. Now, the lawn space on the right border of the design has
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been reduced and the main work in
this
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activity has become larger.
This
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activity has a lot of renovations
such
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as the toilets will be placed in the right corner of the building. plan and it will place a new coffee maker nearby.
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, the meeting area is open with some chairs placed next to it.

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