It is undeniable that juveniles are easily
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people in their surroundings. On
this
matter, some individuals think that their social circle
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them more
while
others
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that influences from
parents
and teachers is higher. In my opinion, friends have
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on them as they spend longer
time
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their daily lives.
However
,
this
essay
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to explore deeply both points of view.
To begin
with, youngsters have a higher tendency
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influenced
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their characters, attitudes and thoughts as they are vulnerable and
. The exposure and spending hours are directly related to
this
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. These days, children are less likely
spendingChange the verb form
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time
with their
parents
as their
parents
are struggling
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their family's expenses and finances or they are busy with household chores. They can rarely gather at dinner
time
.
Consequently
, it is evident that influences from their
parents
are
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.
On the other hand
, children have more opportunities to spend longer
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with their friends from morning to evening at school or even after school. As a
, they become more closed
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and mimic characters and communication skills.
Furthermore
, they share their thoughts and interests, which
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them deeply influenced each other.
Therefore
, influential power among them
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.
Nevertheless
, since they are still young and are not capable
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either right or wrong, their guardians should not
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them unattended. They should set aside
time
for them, thereby they can minor their behaviours and guide them.
To sum up
, it can be reiterated that exposure highly
relyChange the verb form
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on young people's character and behaviours. Regarding
this
matter, it is clearly shown that peer can influence each other as they spend more
time
together than their
parents
.