The pie charts below show the percentage of students on the one adult education center taking a various course offered in 1985 and this year.
The chart demonstrates information about the proportion of
students
taking a variety of courses at one adult educational centre between 1985 and the current year.
Overall
, the two courses of music appreciation and local history were replaced by an IT course
between two different years. Additionally
, the cookery course
experienced an increase whereas
the figure for the others not witness a rising tendency.
Looking at music appreciation, local history and cookery courses for further
detail, it can be seen that the course
of music appreciation and local history had 8% and 15% learners respectively in 1985. In the current year, they were replaced by IT course
with over a quarter of students
. As for the cookery course
, it witnessed an increasing proportion of students
from 14% to 19%.
Turning to the remaining statistics, where the figures decreased and remained unchanged. With regard to the fitness and dance course
, their percentage reached a plateau between two years with 22%. At the same time, the rate of students
doing the development in art went down slightly between 17% and 15%, whereas
that enrol in modern languages (French, German and Spanish) declined more noticeably from nearly a quarter to 19%Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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