The given two graphs provide data on the number of participants in the Olympics from 1924 to 2012, divided by gender and the total number of people.
The two
graphs
provide data on the number
of people who participated in the Olympics over the course of 90 years. It is important to notice that graphs
were dissected into two groups: gender and a complete sum.
Overall
, a rising trend can be seen in both graphs
. Furthermore
, throughout the years, the number
of male participants attains the highest score, whereas
a
figure of females rapidly increases by the end. Correct article usage
the
It is clear that
the two graphs
directly correlate with each other.
On the one hand, in 1924, starting at 3000 men the number
gradually climbed to just under 6000. following
this
, women start with a figure of just above 0 and increase to nearly 2000 people by 1984, next the number
skyrockets by more than half, reaching 5000 in 2014.
According to
the second graph, in 1924, the total of participants was equal to 3000, respectively. Consequently
, with the rise in the number
of female players
the final Add a comma
players,
number
took an upward trend of just above 10000 in total.Submitted by katenok200312 on
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