The maps detail the changes to the layout of a public library between 20 years ago and present day
The maps illustrated the transformation of a
library
over the span of two decades until now.
Overall
, there was a significant change in the library
’s interior scheme, with the appearance of private spaces and facilities, the library
seems to more
contemporary. Especially, there is an open space right in the Add a missing verb
be more
the
central area.
First of all, in the left-hand corner next to the entrance of the Remove the redundancy
apply
library
where reading
Correct article usage
the reading
room
including newspaper
and magazines Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
were
located Correct subject-verb agreement
was
in
20 years ago. Change preposition
apply
However
, it was replaced by a computer room
. To the right, there was an enquiry desk where customers could buy tickets, return borrowed books
and so on; however
, it has been transformed into a café. Meanwhile, adult fiction books
were moved into
the right-hand side of the Change preposition
to
room
, making way for all reference books
on the left. Below the former book section is a small information desk and three self-service machines, overtaking the space previously occupied by adult non-fiction books
. In the middle of the library
, tables and chairs have been completely removed.
The rest section of the library
has also
been subtainable
alterations, with the Correct your spelling
substantial
room
in the left-hand corner that accommodated CDs, videos and computer games was
rebuilt into Unnecessary verb
apply
children’s
fiction Correct article usage
a children’s
books
room
with two sofas, and it also
serves as a space for hosting storytelling events. Finally
, there is a lecture room
is
located in the back right-hand where children’s Unnecessary verb
apply
books
used to be.Submitted by chauhongngoc.577 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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