The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feactures, and make comparisons where revelent

The provided chart shows the details of yearly

sales

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and

rentals

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of movies from a store and the data is collected between 2002 and 2011 time period. In overview, the

DVD

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sales

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has

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improved right from the beginning, the entry of blueray came in 2007. The VHS

sales

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declined from 2002, the

rentals

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are

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seeing

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down trend

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from the beginning The

rentals

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are

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over 1,50,000 in 2002. In 2004 the value came down and

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downfall developed trend developed each and every

year

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in 2011 the

rentals

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were below 1,00,000 in that shop. The VHS

sales

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came down from the

starting

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of the graph, the

sales

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were over 50,000 and in 2005 the VHS

sales

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declined below 10,000 The

DVD

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sales

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in that shop

was

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getting surged right from the first

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of the graph, in 2002 the

sales

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of

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DVD

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DVDs

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were below 50,000 but in 2011 the value of

DVD

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sales

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was above 150,000. The blueray products came

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in between

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inbetween

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in between

the graph in 2007 right from that

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the

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are growing each

year

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