The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feactures, and make comparisons where revelent

The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feactures, and make comparisons where revelent
The provided chart shows the details of yearly
sales
and
rentals
of movies from a store and the data is collected between 2002 and 2011 time period. In overview, the
DVD
sales
has
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improved right from the beginning, the entry of blueray came in 2007. The VHS
sales
declined from 2002, the
rentals
are
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also
seeing
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down trend
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from the beginning The
rentals
are
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over 1,50,000 in 2002. In 2004 the value came down and
this
downfall developed trend developed each and every
year
in 2011 the
rentals
were below 1,00,000 in that shop. The VHS
sales
came down from the
starting
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of the graph, the
sales
were over 50,000 and in 2005 the VHS
sales
declined below 10,000 The
DVD
sales
in that shop
was
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getting surged right from the first
year
of the graph, in 2002 the
sales
of
DVD
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DVDs
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were below 50,000 but in 2011 the value of
DVD
sales
was above 150,000. The blueray products came
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in between
in-between
inbetween
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in between
the graph in 2007 right from that
year
the
sales
are growing each
year
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