Band 6+: The chart gives employment and education statistics for eight European countries in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the proportion of
employment
and education
rates
in addition
to the average income
in eight European countries
in 2015 with additional age information.
Overall
, in these eight countries
, the employment
rates
are not dramatically different from each other. The income
statistics are related to both employment
and education
rates
.
The highest employment
rate was in Norway with 74.8% and also
Norwegian people had the highest income
with 41.483€. Another Scandinavian country Latvia, had 68% of employees however
their income
was one of the lowest with 5.828€. 66% of Luxembourg
the population
was working and their mean income
was 34.320€. Bulgaria and Portugal had close rates
of around 63.5% of employees, even though their income
levels had slight differences they were still one of the lowest-income
countries
with 3.332€ and 8.435€. Lastly
, half of the Greek population
was working and their income
was 7.520 on average.
On the other hand
, education
rates
differed between countries
. In both Luxembourg, Norway and the UK around 40% of the population
were studying in higher education
. Latvia, Austria and Greece had around 30% studying rate. Less than a quarter of the population
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