The charts below give information about different types of waste disposed of in one country in 1960 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table contains information pertaining to the changes that took place in

waste

disposal in an unspecified country in the specific years of 1960 and 2011.

Overall

, the proportion of

waste

disposal for plastic, food, wood, and metal increased, whilst the remaining categories saw a decrease, except for green

waste

and glass, which remained the same in both years.

Additionally

, disposable plastic

waste

saw the most noticeable rise,

while

the opposite was true for paper. In 1960, food and plastic experienced a similar upward trend in

waste

disposal, increasing from 12% and 8% to 21% and 18%, respectively. Concurrently, the proportion of wood thrown away doubled to 8%,

while

metal (

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the smallest) saw the slightest rise to 9% from 8%. Moving on to paper, which saw the highest disposable

waste

in 1960 at 25%, before decreasing to 15% by 2011.

Similarly

, textiles (17%) and other materials (11%) dropped slightly to 11% and 4%, respectively.

Conversely

, green

waste

at 9% and glass at 5% saw precisely the same figures in both years.

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