task 1. the charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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There are two given graphs first one shows the
Percentage
of householders with electtrical
appliances between Correct your spelling
electrical
years
1920 to 2019, and the second Correct article usage
the years
graph
shows the number of hours of housework per week between the years
1920 to 2019.
As shown in the first graph
it is linked between years
and the percentage
of households. However
, Recording
to the Verb problem
According
graph
the percentage
of Refrigerator was almost 0% in 1920, Then
it boomed to 55% by 1940. Also
, there is
an increase in washing machine Wrong verb form
was
percentage
by 1940 to 60% from 40% in 1920. In addition
, vacuum cleaner was increased in 1980 by 60% since 1920. By 2019, all households percentage
has increased washing
Change preposition
by washing
machine
Fix the agreement mistake
machines
rises
to 72%, Verb problem
apply
While
, refrigerators and vacuum cleaners both reached 100%.
The second graph
links between the number of hours per week and years
. As a result
, the graph
shows there is a huge decline in hours each year to 2019 by 40%.
In Reference to both graphs
they present there is a leap in the household sector seen by Add a comma
graphs,
figures
.Correct article usage
the figures
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