You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The line chart depicts information on the average number of drivers travelling each day using different means including car, bus or train, throughout the period 1970 and 2020, with
forcasting
for 2030.
Correct your spelling
forecasting
Overall
, cars showed popularity and an upward trend throughout the peiod
. Correct your spelling
period
While
buses experienced a decline and demonstrated a downward trend.
In 1970, cars illustrated popularity and this
countinued
to rise peaking at nearly 7, it is Correct your spelling
continued
continues
also
anticipated to sharply increase in 2030 to be
around 9. Unnecessary verb
apply
In contrast
, buses undergone
a dramatic fall, starting from nearly 4 in 1970 and expected to decline to 3 Add a missing verb
have undergone
at
2030.
Change preposition
by
On the other hand
, train showed a gradual increase, with minor fluctuaction
between 2000 to 2010. Correct your spelling
fluctuation
fluctuations
However
, the rate jumped in 2020 to around 4,
and Remove the comma
apply
expected
to Add a missing verb
is expected
further
rise in 2030.
In the
summary, it is worth Correct article usage
apply
to note
that car usage dominated throughout the years and it is projected to continue Change the verb form
noting
untill
2030, peaking at 9. Correct your spelling
until
While
the usage of buses is expected to experience a decline.Submitted by marammajid1999 on
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