You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph below shows the average number of UK

commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between

1970 and 2030.

Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the

information shown below.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the

main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The line chart depicts information on the average number of drivers travelling each day using different means including car, bus or train, throughout the period 1970 and 2020, with
forcasting
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forecasting
for 2030.
Overall
, cars showed popularity and an upward trend throughout the
peiod
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period
.
While
buses experienced a decline and demonstrated a downward trend. In 1970, cars illustrated popularity and
this
countinued
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continued
continues
to rise peaking at nearly 7, it is
also
anticipated to sharply increase in 2030 to
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around 9.
In contrast
, buses
undergone
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a dramatic fall, starting from nearly 4 in 1970 and expected to decline to 3
at
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2030.
On the other hand
, train showed a gradual increase, with minor
fluctuaction
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fluctuation
fluctuations
between 2000 to 2010.
However
, the rate jumped in 2020 to around 4
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and
expected
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to
further
rise in 2030. In
the
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summary, it is worth
to note
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that car usage dominated throughout the years and it is projected to continue
untill
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until
2030, peaking at 9.
While
the usage of buses is expected to experience a decline.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • commuters
  • average
  • mode of transport
  • consistent
  • steady rise
  • significant increase
  • gradual decline
  • projection
  • surpassing
  • external factors
  • advancements
  • public transportation policies
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