The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in one country in 2013, 2015 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in one country in 2013, 2015 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart above illustrates the different methods people utilised to access
news
in
years
, 2013, 2015 and 2017 by
percentage
. Television is the predominant source
which
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that
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the public used the most to access
news
in all 3
years
recorded,
accounted
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accounting
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for more than two third (66%), (71%) and (79%) of the
pupolation
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population
respectively in
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the year
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year
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years
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2015, 2017 and 2013, despite a slight decrease
percentage
over the
years
.
Significant
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A significant
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decrease
of
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in
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the
percentage
of users accessing
news
via newspaper was presented in the chart with drops of around 20% every 2
years
between 2013 and 2017. In 2017, only 21% of the recorded population accessed
news
via newspaper, half the
porportion
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proportion
of the people using the same method in 2013 (42%). Internet was the
mean
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means
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of
news
access with a stark increase in usage
percentage
with 69% of the people within the census
used
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using
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the
internet
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Internet
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to obtain
news
in 2017, more than
doble
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double
of
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apply
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the
percentage
in 2013 at 31%. Trends for the population accessing
news
through radio remained stable between 2013 and 2017, with less than one-third recorded in all three
years
at 31%, 30% and 30% respectively.
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