The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in one country in 2013, 2015 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the percentage of people accessing news via different media in one country in 2013, 2015 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart above illustrates the different methods people utilised to access
news
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in
years
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, 2013, 2015 and 2017 by
percentage
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. Television is the predominant source
which
Correct word choice
that

It seems that conjunction use may be incorrect here.

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the public used the most to access
news
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in all 3
years
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recorded,
accounted
Wrong verb form
accounting

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb accounted. Consider changing it.

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for more than two third (66%), (71%) and (79%) of the
pupolation
Correct your spelling
population

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respectively in
Change the article
the year

It appears that the article usage before year is incorrect. Consider making a change.

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year
Fix the agreement mistake
years

It seems that year may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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2015, 2017 and 2013, despite a slight decrease
percentage
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over the
years
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.
Significant
Correct article usage
A significant

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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decrease
of
Change preposition
in

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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the
percentage
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of users accessing
news
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via newspaper was presented in the chart with drops of around 20% every 2
years
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between 2013 and 2017. In 2017, only 21% of the recorded population accessed
news
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via newspaper, half the
porportion
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proportion

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of the people using the same method in 2013 (42%). Internet was the
mean
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means

It seems that mean may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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of
news
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access with a stark increase in usage
percentage
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with 69% of the people within the census
used
Wrong verb form
using

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the
internet
Capitalize word
Internet

The word internet should be capitalized in this context.

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to obtain
news
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in 2017, more than
doble
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double

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of
Change preposition
apply

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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the
percentage
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in 2013 at 31%. Trends for the population accessing
news
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through radio remained stable between 2013 and 2017, with less than one-third recorded in all three
years
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at 31%, 30% and 30% respectively.

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Linking words: Add some linking words.
Linking words: Add linking words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words news, years, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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