The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The diagram
according to
the picture above illustrates the amounts of products moved in the United Kingdom for 28
years
to 2002 by four kinds of transits. I will analyze the data and make a summary of it.  With regards to the trends in the materials transferred, we can separate them into two different ways.
Firstly
, the vehicle track and the water increased slightly in the previous
years
.
While
fluctuated greatly in the later
years
for more than ten million tonnes in less than a decade.
However
, the highway improved the farthest to almost achieve a hundred
at the end
.
In addition
, these two lines had higher tendencies compared with the other.  
Secondly
, we can categorize the road for trains and waterwork line together for both low in the line graph. 
Although
only conduit rose slightly stable from lower than ten to just over twenty,
whereas
railroad dropped marginally for twenty
years
since nineteen-seventy-six
then
gradually climbed up
at the end
.
As a result
, the
changed
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is approximately under a million in all periods of time.  In conclusion, It is clearly seen that the three charts were likely to steadily
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up.
On the other hand
, one remains constant, which reached extremely low for nearly zero in twenty-eight
years
later.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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