The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The diagram
according to
the picture above illustrates the amounts of products moved in the United Kingdom for 28 Linking Words
years
to 2002 by four kinds of transits. I will analyze the data and make a summary of it.
With regards to the trends in the materials transferred, we can separate them into two different ways. Use synonyms
Firstly
, the vehicle track and the water increased slightly in the previous Linking Words
years
. Use synonyms
While
fluctuated greatly in the later Linking Words
years
for more than ten million tonnes in less than a decade. Use synonyms
However
, the highway improved the farthest to almost achieve a hundred Linking Words
at the end
. Linking Words
In addition
, these two lines had higher tendencies compared with the other.
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Secondly
, we can categorize the road for trains and waterwork line together for both low in the line graph. Linking Words
Although
only conduit rose slightly stable from lower than ten to just over twenty, Linking Words
whereas
railroad dropped marginally for twenty Linking Words
years
since nineteen-seventy-six Use synonyms
then
gradually climbed up Linking Words
at the end
. Linking Words
As a result
, the Linking Words
changed
is approximately under a million in all periods of time.
In conclusion, It is clearly seen that the three charts were likely to steadily Replace the word
change
went
up. Wrong verb form
go
On the other hand
, one remains constant, which reached extremely low for nearly zero in twenty-eight Linking Words
years
later.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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