The bar chart shows type of media to get daily news, by age group 2011.

The bar chart shows type of media to get daily news, by age group 2011.
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The bar chart highlights the figures for three fundamental approaches to updating everyday news, classified into five different
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2011. Looking at the graph from a general perspective, it is readily apparent that microblogging was the least endorsed platform among
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surveyed.
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, the use of social networking sites was inversely proportional to
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factor. A glance at radio shows that 85% to a bit more than 90% of people aged 18 or above received news daily via
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media
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only 40% of those who were between 10 and 17 preferred using it.
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, no matter how much favoured in younger demographics from 10 to 29 years old with roughly 80%, social networking was less utilized by older people, representing 50% for
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-49
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bracket, 40% for
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-64 group and 25% for the oldest
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group. Regarding the least favourite media, microblogging was popular among people aged from 18 to 29 (around 25%) but only held less than 20% in the proportions of other groups.

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