Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The skill of speaking in
this
modern era is a crucial one, especially when one
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thriving in a
country
where they have to speak
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the original
language
and English become
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language
.
Overall
,
this
could cause an important issue and simultaneously,
also
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related to social and practical On one hand,
according to
Mark Manson in 2018, speaking with
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language
, particularly
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the original
language
would be excellent for
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to learn the local culture thoroughly. It is because the
language
could be a bridge between the local
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customs and tourist culture.
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, it could reduce the culture shock effect in
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society.
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, local
people
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high
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respect
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the
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some extent,
this
practically would make the
people
tend to support the respectful person to stay and be comfortable to live in the
country
.
On the other hand
, living in a
country
with
foreign
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language
would make a person forget about their ancient
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ancestors
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of
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in the
country
they are
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.
In addition
,
this
also
could cause the local
people
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other
language
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, which in the future could
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customs and
language
. Based on the research in
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of Sociology Research,
this
could make the indigenous
people
forget their
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traditions
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and change the
language
into
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language
such
as English. Ultimately, Living in a
country
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language
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between
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cultures.
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setbacks
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.
Thus
, it must be prevented before it is too late
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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