The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given chart illustrates the proportion of healthcare expenses of gross domestic products in certain countries of Europe in
three
respective years
2002, 2007 and 2012.
Overall
, Switzerland was the highest paid
country Add a hyphen
highest-paid
on
Change preposition
in
medical
in all Replace the word
medicine
three
years
while
The
France shared the same percentage in 2007. Correct article usage
apply
Additionally
, Belgium stood second on the chart. However
, Estonia was
spent the least amount of money on well-being.
It is clear from the chart that, Switzerland Unnecessary verb
apply
was allocating
approximately 11% of Wrong verb form
allocated
money
Add an article
the money
on
Change preposition
to
Add an article
the heath
a heath
heath
in all Correct your spelling
health
three
years
. Whereas
, Belgium, Denmark, France, Netherland
and Norway shared the same ratio. Belgium recorded Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
same
amount 10% in all Correct article usage
the same
three
years
. Denmark 10
% in 2012 Add a missing verb
had 10
while
in the previous years
it was under 10%. France 10% in 2002 which escalated by approximately 11% in 2007 and Add a comma
years,
drooped
to under 10% in 2012. Norway Correct your spelling
dropped
together with
Netherlands
showed Correct article usage
the Netherlands
same
percentile in medical expenditure 10% in 2012 and 2002 respectively, Meanwhile, Change the article
the same
Netherland
gradually Fix the agreement mistake
Netherlands
decrease
Wrong verb form
decreased
in
health expensesChange preposition
apply
9
% in 2007 and Change preposition
by 9
further
decline
to 8% in 2012.
Wrong verb form
declined
In
Spain, Slovenia, and Luxembourg have Change preposition
apply
Add an article
a descent
descent
amount of contribution as 8% . In compression, Slovenia surged to 10% in 2012 Correct your spelling
decent
while
Luxembourg fell to under 8% around 7%. Lithuania and Poland had same
ratioCorrect article usage
the same
6
% in 2012 and in 2002 or 2007. Change preposition
of 6
Although
Lithuania was at 5% in former years
and Poland rose to 9% in the later year. Estonia has the lowest budget on people's well-being 3% only in all three
years
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Vocabulary: Replace the words three, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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