The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The data illustrates the distribution of male and female
workers
categorised by three different sectors: Services, Agriculture
and Industry
in country
A and country
B
.
Overall
, most males and females
in both
countries work
in Services. For country
A, the second most occupied business sector for both
gender
is Change to a plural noun
genders
Agriculture
, while
an insignificant minority of workers
from both
genders works
in Correct subject-verb agreement
work
Agriculture
observed in B
.
In country
A, Service
Correct article usage
the Service
industry
contributes the highest numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
workers
, recorded at
over half of male Change preposition
with
workers
and almost half of females
Add an article
the females
join
the said Wrong verb form
joining
labor
force. The same trend is observed in Change the spelling
labour
country
B
, with 65% of male workers
and a majority of female workers
choose
to Wrong verb form
choosing
work
there. Moreover
, A shows the least numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
workers
joing
Correct your spelling
in
Industry
regardless of Correct article usage
the Industry
genders
, with 15 Fix the agreement mistake
gender
percent
of males and 8% of Change the spelling
per cent
females
. The data is slightly different for B
, as a third of men work
in Industry
, and the number is three time
larger than the number of women in the same Change to a plural noun
times
industry
, making it the second most popular job segment in B
.
The numbers
of people Fix the agreement mistake
number
work
in Wrong verb form
working
Agriculture
differs significantly from country
A to country
B
, as the numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
workers
compose the said workforce marked the second highest for both
genders in A, with 43% of females
Fix the agreement mistake
female
workers
and a third of males worker
Fix the agreement mistake
male workers
work
there; Wrong verb form
working
whereas
in country
B
, almost no people choose to do agricultural job.Submitted by kimtruong270192 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words workers, agriculture, industry, country, b, females, both, work, numbers with synonyms.
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