The table below gives information about the value of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and re-porting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the value of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and re-porting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The table compares how much money New Zealand made from kiwi fruit
exports
to five different countries over the course of three years (2010, 2011, and 2012). During the time period depicted, Japan was New Zealand's largest export market.
Furthermore
,
while
exports
to Japan, China, and Russia grew,
exports
to Mexico and Saudi Arabia decreased.
Exports
of kiwi fruit to Japan brought in
NZ
$ 271.1
million
in 2010,
while
exports
to China and Russia were significantly lower, at
NZ
$ 74.9
million
and
NZ
$ 0.968
million
, respectively. Export earnings from these three markets had increased to
NZ
$ 325.3
million
,
NZ
$ 94
million
, and
NZ
$ 2.4
million
, respectively, after two years. Turning to the two remaining countries, New Zealand's
kiwi
Capitalize word
Kiwi
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export revenues from Saudi Arabia have steadily declined, from
NZ
$ 290,000 in 2010 to only
NZ
$ 82,000 in 2012.
Exports
to Mexico,
on the other hand
, followed a slightly different pattern, dropping by
NZ
$ 3.6
million
from 2010 to 2011,
then
increasing by
NZ
$ 0.9
million
the following year.
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