The table below gives information about the value of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and re-porting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the value of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and re-porting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The table compares how much money New Zealand made from kiwi fruit
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to five different countries over the course of three years (2010, 2011, and 2012). During the time period depicted, Japan was New Zealand's largest export market.
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while
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to Japan, China, and Russia grew,
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to Mexico and Saudi Arabia decreased.
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of kiwi fruit to Japan brought in
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$ 271.1
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in 2010,
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to China and Russia were significantly lower, at
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$ 74.9
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and
NZ
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$ 0.968
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, respectively. Export earnings from these three markets had increased to
NZ
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$ 325.3
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,
NZ
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$ 94
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, and
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$ 2.4
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, respectively, after two years. Turning to the two remaining countries, New Zealand's
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export revenues from Saudi Arabia have steadily declined, from
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$ 290,000 in 2010 to only
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$ 82,000 in 2012.
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to Mexico,
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, followed a slightly different pattern, dropping by
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$ 3.6
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from 2010 to 2011,
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increasing by
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$ 0.9
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the following year.
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