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Thw chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. summeruse the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevent.

Thw chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. summeruse the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevent.
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The provided bar chart illustrates the frequency of individuals who consumed fast
food
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 in
restaurants
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 in the USA from 2003 to 2013.
Overall
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, it can be observed that the majority of
people
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 preferred to visit fast
food
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restaurants
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 either once a
week
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 or once or twice a month.
Additionally
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, the frequency of
people
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 going to
restaurants
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 decreased over the 10-year period. In detail, the percentage of individuals who ate fast
food
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 every day or never did so was under 5%
initially
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.
This
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 figure declined to approximately 3% and 4%, respectively, and remained steady at that level until the end of the period. The frequency of those who ate fast
food
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 several times a
week
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 peaked at nearly 20% in 2006, up from around 17% in 2003, but declined to just over 15% in 2013. For the remaining frequencies, those eating fast
food
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 once a
week
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 and once or twice a month showed significant shifts. The percentage of
people
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 who visited fast
food
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restaurants
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 once a
week
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 started at around 31% and saw a significant decline to just over 27% by 2013.
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, those who ate fast
food
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 once or twice a month started at a similar level and increased to 33% in 2013. Meanwhile, the percentage of
people
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 who visited fast
food
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restaurants
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 a few times a year remained around 15% throughout the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, restaurants, people, week with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food restaurant
  • Frequency
  • Consumption
  • Decadal change
  • Trend analysis
  • Peak years
  • Demographics
  • Eating out
  • Health trends
  • Economic conditions
  • Food industry
  • Demographic segmentation
  • Cuisine
  • Independent outlets
  • Chain restaurants
  • Longitudinal study
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