The table below shows the prices of a cup of coffee in 6 cities in Australia in 2010 and 2014.

The table below shows the prices of a cup of coffee in 6 cities in Australia in 2010 and 2014.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below shows the prices of a cup of coffee in 6 cities in Australia in 2010 and 2014.
Presented for consideration is a table illustrating the money which individuals in Australia spent on coffee in six urban areas between 2010 and 2014.
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, it can be seen that all cities witnessed an upward trajectory,
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Brisbane still remained unchanged throughout the timeframe.
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, the spending on coffee in Melbourne was the biggest
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Canberra's figure saw the opposite. Beginning with Melbourne, which experienced an increase from $2.4 to %2.9, making
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the highest
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at 20.8%.
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was followed by Sydney, it is evident that the expenditure on coffee in
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city was the highest in both years and it stood at $2.9 before rising to $3.17 the
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's statistics accounted for 13.2%. Moving onto Adelaide and Perth, these numbers started at $1.87 and $2.1
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experienced a rising trend to $2 and $2.25, respectively.
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Adelaide and Perth accounted for 6.95% and 7.1%, in that order. In reference to Canberra,
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, reported at 6.25% and it increased from $1.5 to $1.7. With respect to Brisbane where both 2010 and 2014, their spending stood at $2.25.

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