The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart compares estimated illiteracy rates of
world
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the world
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for men and women for 6 different region categories which are "Developed Countries", "Latin American/ Caribbean", "East
Asia
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/ Oceania", "
Sub - Saharan
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Sub-Saharan
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Africa", "Arab States" and "South
Asia
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" about
last
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year.
Overall
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, we can observe that the
female's
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percentages were higher than
male's
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the male's
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for all areas.
In addition
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, it is shown that
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Sub-Saharan
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Africa, Arab States and South
Asia
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had the highest numbers for both men and women,
while
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Developed
Counties
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countries
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, Latin American/ Caribbean and East
Asia
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/ Oceania had the lowest. Male's highest rate concerned men from South
Asia
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and reached approximately 35%.
On the other hand
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, developed countries had the lowest percentage of male percentage at almost 1%. The same thing happened for female's lowest percentage that developed countries had at nearly 2%.
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, the highest figure for women was at 55% for
female
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females
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from South
Asia
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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